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Journalism
Headlines and Copyediting
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9th Grade
03/01/2006

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AP or Summary Lead
Definition
straight forward,
short,
informative,
traditionally used for inverted pyramid stories,
other wise known as summary lead,
they summarize the story
mainly news leads
Term
5 W's, H
Definition
Who
what
where
when
why
how
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transitions
Definition
a smooth change from one subject to another or from one paragraph to another
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story telling style
Definition
bringing out the drama in an event through story telling, the writer sets the scene, introduces the characters, and narrates the events, weaving in facts and opintions from sources.
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Combination Style
Definition
writing the lead of a news story in summary form then telling the rest of the story in the order it happened
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offensive newspaper language
Definition
be sensitive to the feelings of others, be politically correct, be respectful, do not stereotype, no racial terms,
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Bias
Definition
do not be bias, mainly regarding:rac, age, gender, sexual orientation, or philosphy of life, women arent chicks babes or dolls, an enviromentalist is not a tree hugger, men arent hunks,
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Succint
Definition
clear sentences,
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use clear simple words
Definition
do not use pretentious words, communicate with your audience,
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jargon
Definition
unclear language to the audience, do not use unfamiliar language that the audience would not understand and that only a certain group of people would.
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straight forward sentences
Definition
write simple and to the point sentences, dont write too simple ex. the flag is red. but right to where all audiences can understand.
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redundancy
Definition
do not say things like: spherical in shape.. spherical already refers to shape, or do not say surrounded on all sides because the word surrounded means on all sides.
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cliches
Definition
do not use them! it shows the audience that the writer is too lazy to think of words or phrases on his or her own.
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fear of repetition
Definition
do not become so afraid of repetition that you confuse the reader by using different words for one meaning, do ont say "shiny metal", "yellow metal", when you mean gold. just keep saying gold.
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Passive voice
Definition
this is when sentences sound awkward and weak. ex. All students were requested by the Friends of the Enviroment committee to use the recycling bins behind the school.
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a, an, the,
Definition
these words are left out of a good headline.
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present tense
Definition
verbs in headlines should be written in this tense. ex. school wins high state rating.
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past tense
Definition
this kind of tense can be used in headlines in special occasions. ex. volcano erupted 50 years ago today.
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comma, quotation mark, semicolon
Definition
these are the only three forms of punctuation in a headline.
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Commas
Definition
use this mark to replace the word and.
ex. Smith,Jones win scholarships.
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Splitting infinitives or names
Definition
do not do this!!

ex. smith to
go abroad
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the verb to be
Definition
do not use this form of a verb!
wrong: 14 seniors are chosen
correct: 56 seniors chosen
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Capitalize only proper nouns
Definition
Library gives fees to Bob Bobson.
proper nouns.
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Puns
Definition
it is ok to include these in headlines.
ex. phone users have no hang ups
new spray bugs farmers
three booked in library dispute
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